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This article is a demonstration to a previous entry titled…10 Steps To Writing
Traffic Generating Ads
.

Step 1: Set the Tone

My tone for this example is: serious

Step 2: Make a Ranked Features List
    My Features List:

  • Video Training
  • Back office
  • Pre-Defined Ads
  • Automation Software and Training
  • Website
    My Features List in order of importance:

  1. Automation Software and Training
  2. Pre-Defined Ads
  3. Video Training
  4. Website
  5. Back office
Step 3: Convert Your Features to Benefits

My Features List Stated as Benefits:

  1. Automation Software and Training
    Benefit Statement 1. Save lots of time by automating your efforts.
  2. Pre-Defined Ads
    Benefit Statement 2. Pre-Written Ads means you won’t have to spend time writing
    them.
  3. Video Training
    Benefit Statement 3. Totally simple step-by-step video training anyone can follow.
  4. Website
    Benefit Statement 4. Immediate website to promote.
  5. Back office
    Benefit Statement 5. Simple to use BackOffice makes tracking sales easy.
Step 4 Write Your Attention-Getter!

ATTENTION-GETTER: How Home Business Owners are Regaining Valuable Time

This example is a modification on #3 and #7.
Here are the fill in examples.
3. Here is a Method That is Helping [blank] to [blank]
Here is a Method That is Helping Home Business Owners Re-Gain Valuable Time
7. Now You Can Have [something desirable] [great circumstance]
Now you can Advertise your Home Business in Far Less Time.

Step 5: Build Interest

Posing questions is a good way to build interest:

Do you spend a lot of time writing ads?
Do you spend a lot of time posting those ads?
Do you spend a lot of time looking for
better ways to automate your advertising efforts?

Step 6: Build Desire

Use your benefits statements in this area and stretch them.

  • Benefit Statement 1) Save lots of time by automating your efforts.What if you had your own auto-responder? Wouldn’tthat be useful…think about it…as many messagesas you want, the ability to upload leads, and noextra fee attached…the auto-responder comes withthis package.Would you like an article posting tool to save
    you tons of time, and introduce you to article
    hosting sites you didn’t know existed? Included!
  • Benefit Statement 2) Pre-Written Ads means you won’t have to spend time writing
    them.Save lots of time by NOT writing ads. Pre-Tested and pre-Written Ads means
    you don’t have to write them.
  • Benefit Statement 3) Totally simple step-by-step video training anyone can follow.This easy to understand, step-by-step, advertisingand marketing program is a must have for any business.With the easy training videos, you will learn howto do much more in far less time.
  • Benefit Statement 4) Immediate website to promote.Your website is ready for you to begin promoting as soon asyou sign up.YES, There’s More!

Did you notice that #5 is missing. I sometimes leave out the last one
because by this point I really have enough material, but then again, I may decide to use
it later.


Step 7: The Sales Pitch

Make it a BARGAIN. Make it RISK FREE. Make it URGENT.
The low startup cost of only $250 compared to similar
programs is a GREAT DEAL! A $4,500 Software Package
with re-sell rights and complete marketing system for
next to nothing.

Plus you get a $25 discount on your first Yahoo Pay-Per-Click
campaign.

Just about everything you could think of has been
handled, so don’t hesitate…

By the Way, did I mention that you get $200 per sale…
paid directly into your PayPal or AlertPay account.

That means after only 2 sales…Your making a profit.

Step 8: The Call To Action

Think you could encourage 2 others to start
making money?
Yes!
Great, then Proceed to:

http://thesellerdoor.com/SignUp.php?tc=w011

And get started Today.

Step 9: Proofing

In this area, read the entire thing several times.
Check spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
Is it easy to read? Does it get your main point across.

In this example my main benefit is saving time.
Did I make my point? You decide, and leave me a comment.
Your comments are welcome and appreciated.

Now it is time to put it all together.


SUBJECT: How Home Business Owners are Regaining Valuable Time
BODY:
Do you spend a lot of time writing ads?
Do you spend a lot of time posting those ads?
Do you spend a lot of time looking for better
ways to automate your advertising efforts?

What if you had your own auto-responder? Wouldn’t
that be useful…think about it…as many messages
as you want, the ability to upload leads, and no
extra fee attached…the auto-responder comes with
this package.

Would you like an article posting tool to save
you tons of time, and introduce you to article
hosting sites you didn’t know existed? Included!

Free up your time by NOT writing ads. Pre-Tested
and pre-Written Ads means you don’t have to write them.

This easy to understand, step-by-step, advertising
and marketing program is a must have for any business.

With the easy training videos, you will learn how
to do much more in far less time.

Your website is ready for you to begin promoting
as soon as you sign up.

YES, There’s More!

The low startup cost of only $250 compared to
similar programs is a GREAT DEAL! A $4,500
Software Package with re-sell rights and
complete marketing system for next to nothing.

Plus you get a $25 discount on your first Yahoo Pay-Per-Click
campaign.

There is nothing to loose because everything you could
think of has been handled for you, so don’t hesitate…

By the Way, did I mention that you get $200 per sale…
paid directly into your PayPal or AlertPay account.

That means after only 2 sales…Your making a profit.
Could you convince 2 others to buy?
Yes!
Great, then Proceed to:

http://thesellerdoor.com/SignUp.php?tc=w011

And get started Today.


Step 10 Testing

Here is a little tip for split testing. Take an Ad
like this one, make some subtle changes like using a slightly
different Attention getter, or stressing a different MAIN benefit.
Then use that to split test the two together to see which one does
better. Study the winner to see why it won.


Thanks for reading!

My name is Rick Brown. I enjoy internet marketing and advertising, and have
fun doing it.

Currently me and my partner are making $200 per sale. If you are interested
and want to learn more,
visit our Signup Form.


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  4. Tony Thompson Says:

    Can you provide your goods and services into the educational sector in your area. if you can and you are willing to offer the schools a discount, you could find your business in front of all the educational establishments in the uk. you also get direct communication with headteachers to update them with your special offers etc

  5. eyeofatear Says:

    Thanks Tony,

    I will take it into consideration. I am not really sure that it applies to our business, but we are always open to suggestions.

    Rick Brown
    ricky@thesellerdoor.com
    TheSellerDoor.com

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